To sum up, “marriage” is such a sacred term in turning two persons become one. It stands for love, trust and responsibility between couples, including homosexual people. Moreover, the human equal rights give gay people the right to get married, to desire for happiness. As being homosexual is not an illness, and the marriage between them do not harm society and later generation, so preventing same-sex marriage can be listed as an offence.
Since there are huge numbers of gay people cannot live with their true sexuality, always have to hide it, the changing marriage law could affect these people’s life in a positive way. Therefore, for the wellbeing of homosexual community and human conscience, the same sex marriage should be allowed.
Hey Nam!
ReplyDeleteFirstly I must tip my hat to you for writing a very passionate blog (it comes through in the writing about how you feel about the topic at hand). I think the issue is one of significance and so all the more publicity and debate on it the better. I believe in the right of two people (regardless of sexual preference) to have the right to get married and have children if they wish.
The structuring of this blog is good and well done but the one issue that I found hard was that some parts were a bit hard to read just in a grammatical sense. Some sentences didn't make sense (Since there are huge numbers of gay people [who] cannot live with their true sexuality, always have to hide it, the changing marriage law could affect these people’s life in a positive way.). Perhaps getting someone to have a look over this and giving it just a fine tuning would fix that one critique but all in all it is well done and you are very passionate on this issue.
Keep it up!
Hi Nam.
ReplyDeleteWell let me just start by saying how much respect i have for yo.. The topic you have chosen is awesome. Not many people can relate to it but i know i can because i fully support This Issue.
The only thing wrong is that you have a few grammatical errors, but im sure a little proof reading would help fix that. Overall i love this blog! keep up the good work.
Hi Nam.
ReplyDeleteWell first I would say it is rather a good topic since it has become quite controversial issue these days. I can see you make really clear argument and find many examples to prove your opinion. I really love your choose of color for the blog background.